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  mynameisjinjiahong,andmyenglishnameiskaci.i’m14yearsold,37kg.ilikeenglish,andbooks,red,orange,pink,blue,shuttlecock,waternmelon,apple,andbananas.yesterday,iwenttozhejianguniversitytolearnenglish.oh,hereisbeautiful!imakeafriend.hernameismayun.sheisfromhangzhou,she’s10yearsold,andlikesapples.

  today,i’mveryhappy.

  班主任评语:verygood!keepstudyinghard,andibelieveyoucanlearnalothere!

  mychinesenameis范依昀。myenglishnameiskate.brown.myfamilynameisbrown.myfirstnameiskate.i’m12yearsold.iamchinese.i’mfromhuzhou.ihavemanyhobbies.ilikeplayingfootball,andplayingcomputer.ilikebluebest.ihaveafriend.hernameis蒋姣姣。shelookshappy,sheislovely.ilikeherverymuch.shelikeswatchingtvandsinging.thereisthreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,motherandme.myfatherisadoctor,mymotherisadoctortoo.ilikethemverymuch.iamhappyeveryday.mytelephonenumberis.welcometomyhome.

  班主任评语:verygood!yourhand-writhingisverynice.

  todayisthefirstdayofthesummercamp.icouldn’tsleepwellyesterdayevening.maybeifeltalittleuncomfortable.iseldomlivewithothers.andthebedroomisdifferentformhome.butimetthreenewfriendshere.they’refriendlyandlovely.

  afterthebeginningceremony,ihadanexam.thefirstpassagewasalittledifficultforme.somewordsihaven’tlearnbefore.ispentsomeminutesonit.anyway,ithoughtipassedit.

  intheafternoon,isawtheforeignteacher.hernameisjane.abeautifulfirlwhocomesfromusa.sheisnotold,just22.butshehadbeentoeurope,beijing.sheletusplaysomegames,becauseshewantedustoknoweachtherquickly.butithinkthegamesisnotinteresting.sosomestudentsdon’tputtheirheartsinthegame.alsotheteacherspokesoquicklythaticouldn’tunderstandher.

  班主任评语:beautifulhand-writing!exceptforsomegrammermistakes,thisdairycouldbeperfect!asfortheclass,ithink

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